Everyday God puts her through the test,
And every single day she says to herself,
“Its alright, I will do my best.”
When she moves out of her nest,
The world puts her through the test,
And she softly whispers to herself,
“I will do my best.”
She slips into his arms,
Hoping to find some rest,
But alas! Here too she has to pass the test.
She weeps to herself “I will do my best.”
At the end of the day,
She puts her thoughts to rest,
Smiles to herself and says,
“I have done my best.”
And every single day she says to herself,
“Its alright, I will do my best.”
When she moves out of her nest,
The world puts her through the test,
And she softly whispers to herself,
“I will do my best.”
She slips into his arms,
Hoping to find some rest,
But alas! Here too she has to pass the test.
She weeps to herself “I will do my best.”
At the end of the day,
She puts her thoughts to rest,
Smiles to herself and says,
“I have done my best.”
12 comments:
hey..thts a reli nice 1!!...keep d blogs posted woman!!..mwahhh...
Very well written ma'am. Great for starters... Often, in our effort to be our best in the future we fail to give it our best shot in the present. And the "best shot" never comes... If you ever have to be at your best. Be now. In hindsight, its a fabulous thought. Keep it up girl!... Talent hai
Hey! First off, "yaay"!" to ur new blog!..n yeh, as i said, in my view, dis piece reflects sheer optimism..like the way it ends: "I have done my best"..good goin! keep writin! :D
Cheers \m/, (+.+) ,\m/
HEY SNEHA... ITS AN AWWWWWWWESUM POEM!!! THO ITS BEEN PORTRAYED VERY SIMPLY IT CONVEYS A DEEPER THOUGHT.. IM REALLY PROUD OF U... KEEP IT UP N KEEP WRITING NICE STUFF... VALLARI.
hey sneha,gud writin i must say.wat i must note out is tat d deeper sentiment in d poem is really real n hence u can connect to it..but piece of advice from a frnd nxt time use ekdum complicated lyrics so it goes ek dum bouncer...hehehe..:D..
my fav part bou d poem is tat how u changed her emotions in sayin d same thing because evry test in life is different n sum r more difficult than d othas...
kepp writin...
abhi
mast ha!!! keep it up.
gr8 wurk...if dis wazz ur first den i no v got a treat in store fr us!! really well-written....bluebasangel strikes gold1!!
firstly congrats...u have broken the stereotypes...of ritin poems on break ups n hrt brks...nice 2 see sum GOOD POEM on sum REAL TOPIC!!
the poem was a reflection of my inner felings..everyday i think hav i dun sumthng worthwhile o just gt wasted?! N ur poem says it all.............wat 2 say man!! weallly nice work!!
now i noe dat u do hav sum creative side 2 u as welll....haha
not as worthless as i thot...lolz...kiddin ....u rok man...evn thou i feel like kikin ur arse 4 not keepin in touch...
keep ritin mo poems...on REAL TOPICS!!
LOOOOOOOOOOVE U LOTSSS!!
MIMI.........
hey! sneha ur determination seemed 2 b strong. this type of thinking wll take u much higher&higher. u wll move higher in ur life above ur abilities my wishes r with u keep it up.hve a good future journey ur well wishers.
simple, intense, true, inspiring
ooooooooooooohhhhhhhhhhh!!! lol.. actualli iv already tol ya wot i tink o d poem.. i was d FIRST person u showed it to na!! hehe.. neway il say it again.. li luvvvvvvvv it!! muah!!
Ritika..
Hey Nice one there ,plus nice pictures also keep up the work.
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